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Corrected (one sentence): A tall baobab is a great hiding place with tasty leaves and fruit, so you can hide there for a long time.

Or, as two short sentences: A tall baobab is a great hiding place. It has tasty leaves and fruit, so you can hide there for a long time.

Why we changed it:

  1. Start a sentence with a capital letter: every sentence begins with a big letter (A, B, C...).
  2. Use the word "there" to show the place where you hide: "hide there" means hide in the tree.
  3. If you join two ideas with "so," put a comma before it: "..., so ..." OR make two short sentences instead.
  4. You can say "baobab tree" to make it extra clear that it is a tree, but "baobab" alone is okay.

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