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Original sentence:
Furry paws help fennec foxes and jerboas walk on hot sand and not get get burned

Corrected sentence:
Furry paws help fennec foxes and jerboas walk on hot sand without getting burned.

Why this is better (simple steps):

  1. There was an extra word: "get" was written twice. We remove the duplicate.
  2. We use "without getting burned" to show what the paws stop from happening. That sounds smoother than "and not get burned."

Another short way to say it:
Furry paws keep their feet from getting burned.

Good job noticing the sentence — you fixed it by making it clearer and removing the extra word!


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