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Corrected sentence:

Fennec foxes and jerboas walk on hot sand without getting burned. They have furry pads on their paws.

Why this is good:

  • The first sentence is fine as it was — it tells what they do and ends with a period.
  • The second sentence needed a period at the end. I changed "furry socks" to "furry pads on their paws" because that is a clearer way to say how their feet are protected.
  • If you want to keep the fun picture, you can write: "They have furry 'socks' on their paws." The quotes show it's a playful comparison.

Short, kid-friendly explanation: These animals have lots of fur on their feet that works like little socks, so the hot sand does not hurt them.


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