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Great sentence! Here is a clearer way to say it for kids:

Fennec foxes and jerboas have furry feet so the hot sand won't burn them.

Why this is better (short and simple):

  • Furry feet is clearer than "furry socks" because animals do not wear socks; they have fur on their feet.
  • So the hot sand won't burn them tells why they have furry feet — it keeps their feet safe from the hot sand.

Another short option: Fennec foxes and jerboas have fur on their feet to protect them from hot sand.

Nice work — you can say either one!


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