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Corrected sentence:

Fennec foxes and jerboas have furry soles, so the hot sand won't burn them.

Child-friendly version:

Fennec foxes and jerboas have furry feet so the hot sand won't hurt them.

Why we changed it (simple):

  • We put a comma before "so" because there are two ideas joined together.
  • We added "the" before "hot sand" to make the sentence clearer.
  • "Feet" is an easier word than "soles" for a 4‑year‑old to understand.

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