Correct sentence: The first fresh snow makes you want to make a big snowman!
Or, if you are talking about yourself: The first fresh snow makes me want to make a big snowman!
Why:
- After the word "want" we usually add "to" before another action. So we say "want to make," not "want make."
- "First fresh snow" is okay, but you can also say "first fresh snowfall" or just "the first snow."
- The exclamation mark (!) is fine if you are excited.
Quick practice: Fix this sentence: I want play outside. → I want to play outside.