You have blossomed this unit, moving through language like warm honey over the old stones of Vicars' Close. Your understanding simmers, clear and seasoned; analysis rings like cathedral bells across the Bishop's Palace moat. Creative responses glide, white and graceful as swans on Wells water. Use of vocabulary and structure is richly flavoured; conventions are mostly confident, occasionally needing gentle stirring. For next steps, deepen inference, tighten paragraph transitions and polish punctuation. Overall achievement: developing to proficient. ACARA mapping: English strands — Language, Literature, Literacy. Well done; your work tastes of Somerset air and delight. Keep ringing bright, brave bells.