Corrected (formal):
Hi Anita, I apologize for the delayed response. Our management is currently reviewing other pricing offers. I will get back to you as soon as they reach a decision. Best regards, [Your Name]
Less formal option:
Hi Anita, Sorry for the late reply. Management is reviewing other offers. I'll let you know as soon as they decide. Thanks, [Your Name]
Simple explanations (step-by-step):
- I apologize for the delayed response — more polite and slightly more formal than "Sorry for the delayed reply." Use this in business emails.
- Reviewing other pricing offers sounds clearer and more natural than "considering other price offers." "Pricing offers" or "offers" is better phrasing.
- I will instead of I'll — avoid contractions (like I'll) in formal business writing. In less formal messages, contractions are okay.
- Add a closing and your name (for example, "Best regards, [Your Name]") so Anita knows who sent the message.
- Optional: Add a subject line such as "Update on pricing decision" and, if you know a timeframe, include it (for example, "I expect to have their decision by Friday"). That helps the recipient know when to expect an answer.
If you want, tell me how formal you want the email to be and I can give you a version that matches that tone or include a suggested subject line and signature.