Corrected version: The jaguar is a great hunter. It has shiny yellow fur with black spots.
What I changed (easy steps):
- I put a capital letter at the start of the first sentence: 'The'.
- I made sure each sentence ends with a period so they are separate thoughts.
- I joined the broken lines into full sentences so they read smoothly.
- I kept the description 'shiny yellow fur with black spots' because it sounds good and is correct.
Tip: Start each sentence with a capital letter and finish with a period. Try reading your sentence out loud to see if it sounds complete.
Another simple way to say it: Jaguars are great hunters. They have shiny yellow fur with black spots.