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Corrected version:

During the dry months,
the grasses turn yellow.
However, once the rains fall,
the grasslands turn green.

Step-by-step explanation (easy):

  • Start with a capital letter: The first word of a sentence is big (During, However).
  • Use a comma for a short pause: Put a comma after "During the dry months," and after "However, once the rains fall," so the reader pauses there.
  • Use a period to finish a sentence: Put a period after "the grasses turn yellow." and after "the grasslands turn green." This tells the reader the sentence is finished.
  • "However" is a word that shows a change or contrast. It tells us something different happens when the rains come.

Nice poem! The changes above fix the small punctuation issues so it reads clearly.


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