We want the same idea but with fewer words. Steps: 1) Keep the meaning (music, lights, kids). 2) Use short, easy words. 3) Try one out loud and see which sounds nicest.
- Music and lights bring kids.
- Jingle and signs call kids.
- Happy tune draws kids.
- Lights and song attract kids.
- Jolly music pulls kids.
- Kids follow the jingle.
- The truck's tune brings kids.
- Bright show lures kids.
- Cheerful song calls kids.
- Kids come for the jingle.