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Here is a clearer way to write your sentence:

Corrected: Mountain plants grow in bunches. This helps them hold onto the slope and not dry out.

Why this is better (simple steps):

  • Use "This" to point back to the idea in the first sentence. It makes the meaning clearer than just "It."
  • Say "not dry out" instead of "not get dry." "Dry out" is a natural way to say something loses its water.

Another easy version: Mountain plants grow in bunches. This helps them stay on the slope and keep from drying out.

Nice work! You're making good sentences — keep practicing short, clear ideas like this.


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