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Here are 4 shorter ways to say that sentence:

  1. When there's lots of snow, kids have snowball fights and make a snowman.
  2. When lots of snow falls, kids throw snowballs and build a snowman.
  3. When lots of snow falls, children play and build a snowman.
  4. When it snows a lot, kids have snowball fights and build a snowman.

How I made them shorter (easy steps):

  1. Use shorter words like "kids" instead of "children."
  2. Use contractions or shorter phrases ("there's" instead of "there is").
  3. Change verbs to shorter ones ("throw snowballs" or "play") and sometimes join actions with commas.

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