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Original sentence: Capybaras are friends with everyone and not afraid!

Corrected sentence: Capybaras are friends with everyone and are not afraid.

Why this is better (simple steps):

  1. The first part uses the verb "are" ("are friends"). The second part needs a verb too, so we add "are" again: "are not afraid." This keeps the sentence even and easy to understand.
  2. You can also use a shorter word for kids: "aren't". That gives: "Capybaras are friends with everyone and aren't afraid."
  3. If you want to show excitement, you can keep the exclamation mark at the end: "Capybaras are friends with everyone and aren't afraid!" If it's a normal sentence, use a period.

Easy kid version: Capybaras are friends with everyone and aren't afraid!


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