Original: Just like cows, bison graze, biting off grass, shoots and leaves.
Corrected (simple): Like cows, bison graze by biting off grass, shoots, and leaves.
Why this is better (easy steps):strong>
- We use "Like cows" to say bison are similar to cows.
- We add "by" to show how they graze (the way they eat).
- We put a comma before the last thing in the list: "shoots, and leaves." That makes the list easy to read.
Another correct version: Just like cows, bison graze, biting off grass, shoots, and leaves.
Both corrected sentences are good. The first one is a little clearer for young readers.