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Correct sentence (simple):

Bees pollinate flowers. Because of that, we get juicy apples in the spring.

Short grammar notes (easy):

  • Start the sentence with a capital letter: "Bees" not "bees".
  • Use a period to finish a complete thought: "Bees pollinate flowers."
  • To show cause and effect, you can say "Because of that, ..." or "As a result, ..."

One more natural option:

Bees pollinate flowers, and as a result we have juicy apples in the spring.

Quick science note for you (easy):

  1. In spring, apple trees grow flowers.
  2. Bees visit the flowers and carry pollen from one flower to another.
  3. When flowers get pollinated, the tree can make apples.
  4. Apples grow after the flowers; they often become ripe and juicy later (in summer or fall).

If you want the sentence even shorter for a child: "Bees help flowers make apples." That is simple and correct, too.


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