Grammar check for a 7-year-old: correcting "Bees pollinate flowers so apple trees have juicy apples in summer"

1. "Bees pollinate flowers." is a complete sentence. It tells what bees do.
2. "Apple trees grow juicy apples in summer." is another complete sentence. It tells what happens to apple trees.
3. When we join two complete sentences with the word "so," we usually put a comma before "so." That makes the sentence clearer: ..., so ...
4. Also, saying "grow juicy apples" is a little nicer than repeating the word "apples" twice.

Short meaning: Bees help flowers so apple trees can make yummy apples in summer.

Other good ways to say it:

• "Because bees pollinate flowers, apple trees have juicy apples in summer."
• "Bees pollinate flowers, so apple trees produce juicy apples in summer."

Great sentence — you just needed a small comma and a tiny word change to make it even clearer. Keep writing!