Original: A good saddle and sitting properly make horse riding simple and safe.
Best simple correction: A good saddle and sitting the right way help make riding a horse easier and safer.
Why this is better (easy steps):strong>
- When you talk about two things joined by "and" (a good saddle + sitting the right way), you need a word that matches two things. That is why we use "help make" instead of "makes."
- "Riding a horse" sounds a little clearer to many people than "horse riding," and "easier and safer" are simple words that mean the same as "simple and safe."
- "Sitting the right way" is an easy way to say "sitting properly" for a child. Both are correct, but the first sounds friendlier.
So you can use either of these:
- "A good saddle and sitting the right way help make riding a horse easier and safer."
- "A good saddle and sitting properly help make horse riding easier and safer."
Both are correct — choose the one that sounds nicer to you!