Three simple rewrites for a 7-year-old
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Original idea: Our body is amazing. It can move, think, and feel. On the outside we have soft skin, and inside we have bones, muscles, and organs. Everything works as a team!
Rephrase 1: Our bodies are fantastic helpers. They can run, think, and feel. Outside, our skin is soft, and inside, we have bones, muscles, and organs all working together like a team.
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Rephrase 2: Our bodies are extraordinary machines. They move, think, and sense things. Outside we have smooth skin; inside we have bones, muscles, and organs all teamwork to keep us going.
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Rephrase 3: Think of your body as a great crew. It can move, think, and feel. The outside shows soft skin, and inside you find bones, muscles, and organs all helping one another.