Your sentence is almost correct, but it needs a small adjustment for clarity. Here’s how you can improve it:
Original: 3 PORTRAITS hang on the wall showing Mum, Granny and the brother.
Corrected: Three portraits hang on the wall, showing Mum, Granny, and my brother.
Here are the changes I made:
- Spelling out the number: Instead of using the number '3', it's better to write 'Three' for easier reading.
- Adding a comma: I added a comma before the word 'and' to separate 'Granny' and 'my brother' clearly. This helps listeners and readers understand that these are different people.
- Using 'my brother': It’s clearer to say 'my brother' instead of just 'the brother' so everyone knows who you are talking about.
Keep practicing, and you'll get even better at writing!