Objective

By the end of this lesson, the student will be able to write a descriptive paragraph about basketball using appropriate language arts skills.

Materials and Prep

• Pen/pencil
• Paper

No prior knowledge or preparation is required for this lesson.

Activities

1. Warm-up: Begin by asking the student to write down as many basketball-related words as they can think of in 5 minutes. Encourage them to think about different aspects of the game such as equipment, positions, and actions.

2. Descriptive Paragraph: Instruct the student to choose one basketball-related word from their list and write a descriptive paragraph about it. They should aim to use vivid language and sensory details to paint a clear picture in the reader's mind.

3. Peer Review: Have the student exchange their paragraph with a peer or family member for feedback. Encourage the reviewer to provide constructive criticism and suggestions for improvement.

4. Revision: Based on the feedback received, ask the student to revise their paragraph, incorporating the suggestions and making any necessary changes to enhance clarity and coherence.

5. Final Draft: Instruct the student to write a final draft of their descriptive paragraph, using their revised version. Emphasize the importance of neatness and legibility.

Seventh Grade Talking Points

• "In writing a descriptive paragraph, we want to use specific and vivid language to create a clear image in the reader's mind. Let's think about how we can make our writing more interesting and engaging."
• "When describing a basketball-related word, we can use sensory details to appeal to the reader's senses. For example, we can describe the sound of a basketball bouncing or the feel of the hardwood court."
• "Peer review is an important part of the writing process. It allows us to get feedback from others and improve our work. Remember to be respectful and provide constructive criticism."
• "During the revision stage, we need to carefully read through our paragraph and make changes to improve clarity and coherence. This may involve reorganizing sentences or adding more descriptive details."
• "The final draft is our polished and completed version of the paragraph. It should be free from errors and showcase our best writing skills. Take your time and make sure it looks neat and presentable."