Instructions
This is a creative writing assessment. Read each section carefully and complete the tasks to the best of your ability. Try to use your imagination and write in full sentences. Good luck!
Part 1: Super Sentences
Make these simple sentences more interesting by adding descriptive words (adjectives and adverbs).
- The key was in the grass.
- The girl opened the door.
Your new sentence:
Your new sentence:
Part 2: Describe It!
Imagine you have just found a mysterious box hidden under the floorboards of an old house. Think about the setting and the object.
A. The Setting: The Room
List words and phrases to describe the old room. Think about your five senses.
- Sight (what you see):
- Sound (what you hear):
- Smell (what you smell):
B. The Object: The Box
Now describe the mysterious box. What is it made of? What does it look like? How does it feel?
Part 3: Story Planning
You are going to write a short story based on this idea: "You find a mysterious box hidden under the floorboards of an old house. You find a way to open it..."
Plan your story in the boxes below.
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Beginning Who is the main character? Where are they? How do they find the box? |
Middle How do they open the box? What is inside? What problem or adventure begins? |
End How is the problem solved? How does the story finish? |
Part 4: Write Your Story
Use your plan from Part 3 to write your full story below. Remember to describe the character, the setting, and the character's feelings. Try to use exciting vocabulary and different sentence starters.
Story Title: The Secret Under the Floor
Part 5: Writer's Checklist
Read through your story from Part 4. Tick the boxes if you have included these things.
- My story has a beginning, a middle, and an end.
- I have used capital letters at the start of sentences and for names.
- I have used full stops or question marks to end my sentences.
- I have described the setting.
- I have described how my character feels.
- I have used some interesting adjectives or adverbs.
Answer Key / Marking Guidance
This is a creative writing task, so answers will vary. Use the following guidance to assess the student's work.
Part 1: Super Sentences
Look for the inclusion of at least one adjective or adverb that adds detail to the original sentence.
- Example answers: The tiny, golden key was hidden in the long, green grass. / The shiny key was lying silently in the grass.
- Example answers: The nervous girl slowly opened the creaky, wooden door. / The brave girl quickly opened the heavy door.
Part 2: Describe It!
Look for descriptive language and use of senses.
- A. The Setting: Student should provide plausible details. e.g., Sight: dusty cobwebs, peeling wallpaper, shafts of light. Sound: creaking floorboards, wind whistling. Smell: musty, damp wood.
- B. The Object: Student should use adjectives to describe the box. e.g., A small, dark-wood box with a rusty lock. It felt rough and cold. It had strange carvings on the lid.
Part 3: Story Planning
Assess whether the student has understood the concept of story structure. The plan should show a logical progression from a beginning, through a middle event/problem, to a resolution.
- Beginning: Introduces character/setting and finding the box.
- Middle: Focuses on the central action - opening the box and discovering its contents, leading to a problem/adventure.
- End: Provides a conclusion to the events in the middle.
Part 4: Write Your Story
Use the following criteria to assess the story. Focus on what the student has done well and identify one or two areas for improvement.
| Area | Look for... |
|---|---|
| Structure & Paragraphs | The story has a clear beginning, middle, and end that follows the plan. Some attempt may be made to use paragraphs. |
| Character & Setting | The setting is described with some sensory detail (e.g., "dusty attic," "creaking floor"). The character's actions and feelings are described (e.g., "I felt excited," "my hands trembled"). |
| Vocabulary | The student uses some interesting adjectives (e.g., "ancient," "mysterious") and adverbs (e.g., "carefully," "suddenly"). |
| Sentence Structure | Sentences are generally grammatically correct. There may be some variety in sentence starters (e.g., not every sentence starts with "I" or "The"). Use of conjunctions like 'and', 'but', and 'so' to link ideas. |
| Punctuation | Capital letters are used consistently for the start of sentences. Full stops are used correctly to mark the end of most sentences. |
Part 5: Writer's Checklist
This section is for self-assessment. Check if the student has realistically evaluated their own work against the checklist provided. This demonstrates their growing awareness of writing conventions.